It's much better. In the last months I worked on getting deeper. The thigh of the one leg is parallel to the floor, this is as it is supposed to be. The rim of the one food could be more on the floor. The hand could be turned a bit.
What I see is a diagonal line from the hand to the foot. That's it.
When I say I do free style I add the pose from the second picture i.e. That way I can give myself an adjusment. If the feet were a bit more apart I could go deeper.